Critical State
B. R. Dionysius
Queensland has witnessed five great extinction events over its 1.9 billion years existence. “Critical State” looks at the current impact of climate change, and the human impact on animal and plant species, and even ourselves, across the varied Queensland landscapes.
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Poephila cincta cincta
By the pool, their fingernail-sized gullets undulate briskly
as if they are guilty celebrities scoffing a midnight treat,
their black cravats panting with excitement. They can’t
stay in this kitchen heat for long; fluent in the language
of dehydration, a fast tipple or else they’re dumbstruck.
Their image burned into extinction’s cyclopean retina,
as if this fragile flock gazed into the sun directly, or they
were a picnic of ants fried by a bully’s magnifying glass.
The dam water is a current running through their bodies;
it sets off the electricity of their flight, as one they scatter
to the air, like a handful of wedding rice. Thie fall might
weight as much; in the billionaire’s thoughts he’s ripped
out the earth’s coal-black throat; the box trees cut open
like rich sediment. Their habitat halved like a seed cake.
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Menura alberti
(i)
He whistled to her & like an inquisitive dog
the bowl of her head angled, a satellite dish
to receive the new music. She was muttering
away in some mimic’s foreign language when
he stumbled upon her; a woodland Pokémon
that evolved the power of water & then slaked
some deep desire in him. The brown, rusted
stovepipe of her tail feathers swung back &
forth, as each great scratch of her garden fork
claws ripped the humus open like rotten cloth.
As he fell, he noticed the bathtub-sized granite
boulders were covered in grey lichen squares,
cool & treacherous as damp flannels on a tiled
floor. Momentum snared, he heard her scream.
(ii)
A Trojan War had passed since he last saw one.
Oracle elusive, it had tracked him like a prophecy
or some shadowy ninja as he hiked at Lamington.
Then it had melted into the forest floor like a fat
witchetty grub, a curled white question mark of
memory he could only find again if he dug deeply.
He picked himself up, mud stigmata slashed across
his palms as he retook the track, his partner shaking
her head at the plunge of birdmen. Or that his cry
had become a lyrebird’s sound effect. Recorded for
posterity like he was the endangered animal, a loss of
pride’s habitat. Their black ship of extinction hauled
up on nature’s beachhead, time caulking their voices’
hull; faint echoes of crackling bushfire and corroboree.
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For Judith Wright
Gravity is rolling her particles into a child’s spitball.
Like a student chewing paper in the classroom’s dark,
there is something unlawful about our decline & fall.
In her honour, eucalypts shed their clothes, drop bark.
She has already touched the universe’s filigreed edge.
The red shift galaxies shine singularly as flame trees
in a distant quarry; their blooms are a well-kept hedge
that borders our knowledge, doubt swarms like bees.
She had long been a part of it; her hand-me-down cells
she returned to the sun’s up-market store. A dying star’s
decaying gift signalled the blow of her heart’s iron bell;
as her last breath vanished like the atmosphere on Mars.
She is monumental now; as though there was a Marathon
mound of ancient Greek heroes piled up inside her head.
She was the flint of eco-consciousness that was fiery born,
when she struck at the builders who cleared out the dead.
Still, the earth sucks in its beltline & gyrates its middle age
spread. Forests recede like hairlines thinning out, as the hand
of progress combs through them. All that’s left is hollow rage,
as small groups of creatures turn & make their final stand.
Judith. Her poems are etched on the trunks of scribbly gum.
Insect mouths chew through the grain of her poetic field.
As they kill, borers translate her words into a universal tongue,
& hollow trunks of eucalyptus drum; never yield, never yield.
‘Critical State’ reviewed by Jane Frank in Stylus Lit, September 2023.
Critical State is Brett Dionysius’ ninth full poetry collection, and encapsulates work spanning the past decade in order to celebrate the extraordinary diversity of species in his home state of Queensland but also warn of the biodiversity loss resulting from human action that ‘raises awareness about the increasing effects of the Anthropocene.’ The title Critical State has a menacing double entendre.
This is a book that will endure as an intricate record of Queensland flora and fauna that demonstrates the poet’s acute interest in, as well as research and knowledge of, the natural world—particularly birds—as well as a memorial of what has been, or may soon be, lost . . .
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A rendering of threats: Stephanie Green reviews ‘Critical State’ by B. R. Dionysius, in Rochford Street Review, October 2023.
The poetry of B. R. Dionysius in Critical State holds continuity and rupture in tension as he explores the encroachments of the Anthropocene on distinctive Queensland regional environments. Focused around the poet’s nature observing adventures, the book is divided into five sections which reflect the diverse habitats of the state. These poems capture the beauty and terrible loss of wild creatures and places, and joyful glimpses of survival and recovery.
The book offers an appealing variety of form: shorter poems intersperse longer poems with lines often extending through successive verses, creating a sense of flow and transition. Many of the poems are cameos of experience, recounted almost as stories immersed in vivid tangibility . . .
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Brett Dionysius
B. R. Dionysius was founding Director of the Queensland Poetry Festival. His poetry has been widely published in literary journals, anthologies, newspapers and online both in Australia and overseas.
He is the author of one artist’s book, The Barflies’ Chorus (1995, Lyrebird Press), four poetry collections, Fatherlands (2000, Five Islands Press), Bacchanalia (2002, Interactive Press), Bowra (2013, Whitmore Press), Weranga (2013, Walleah Press), a verse novel, Universal Andalusia (2006, SOI 3) and two chapbooks, The Negativity Bin (2010, PressPress) and The Curious Noise of History (2011, Picaro Press). Critical State (2022, Calanthe Press) is his ninth poetry collection. He teaches English and Literature, lives in Brisbane and in his spare time watches birds.